gmanyo's Reviews

[Everlasting Love]

Almost Perfect

This short was incredible, almost the best I have seen. The acting was phenomenal; I wish they had academy awards for web videos! I really liked the directing as well, almost every camera angle was perfect. What really pushed this movie one step above the rest, though, was the soundtrack. I can tell much thought went into picking the song.
The only problem that I had with the movie was the lack of dynamic lighting; I could see everything, so no problem there, but you definitely could have done more. Otherwise, great job! Can't wait to see more!

MiracleFruitClock responds:

;-)

[The Dangers of Halloween]

Nice

Awesome flash man. I really hate those stupid news shows that just try and scare you to get you to keep watching. Thanks for uploading!

[Dog V.S Jesus - Part One]

Rigged!

So either puppies die or Jesus dies?!?! It's rigged, man! Rigged!

And is this ever going to be finished?
God's grave definitely wins "Best Epitaph Ever" award, though.

[Survival Unleashed]

Good, but done already

Nice game, kept it simple. But perhaps too simple, and not really original. Add some music, a couple extra features. Make sure to PM me if you re-release and add new stuff!

[Exnotic FUO - Crying Angels]

Err...

(I just wrote about an 1000 character review for this, and then somehow pressed "back" and lost ALL of my work, so sorry, but I'm going to be a bit more brief this time, lol.) I think that this song really had trouble getting somewhere. It was really repetitive. Do something else with it, be creative, mix it up! It's more of a loop repeated alot than a song. Add more tracks or something! I mean, maybe this would be alright for a one minute song on which you base a longer song, but for over four minutes? Sorry, it's just not working for me. Also, the choir synth was annoying. I think maybe you should change the sound a bit by tweaking your synthesizer. I don't want to sound mean, but I think you could make this really good with more work. PM me if you release an improved version, though, I would like to hear it!

ExnoticFUO responds:

i dont give a shit in what you think :O
i'm just kiddin lol, ok, but i dont think i will fix this anymore on a long time, but someday maybe so thanks for the tips.
/exnotic

[-<- CyberMist ->-]

Hmm...

Usually I rant in my reviews at people for not being original, but I liked the beginning of your song, regardless of the fact that it was quite a bit like other dance songs, and lacked originality. I thought the second half was more original, although not as good. I would suggest splitting this up into two different songs and making them MUCH longer, because I could see both of them turning into pretty sweet songs. The bass around 0:50 was VERY annoying, I would suggest changing that. Loved the vocal sample in the middle, though. If you release improved versions of these songs, make sure to PM me, I would love to hear!

CyberPot responds:

Thx for the review. Perhaps i will release them in 2 seperate songs in the future, cus i am not happy with the worki put in this song in fact. But i am currently working on some other songs. Anyways thx for ur opinion :)

[DXM - You Have The Right To...]

I liked the start, but then...

What the heck was up with that 8-bit synth that came in? It was sounding really cool for a moment, but after that it turned into some sort of videogame music. I would suggest removing some of those hard-core in-your-face synths and opt for more of the ambience at the beginning and the cool glitch-style stuff at about 1:15 (I'm a sucker for glitch). Otherwise it's just another dance song, and we already have, like, a million of those on this site. I did like those glitch synths in the middle, by the way. I'm just negative in my reviews, lol :P .
PM me if you make an improved/remastered version, I would love to hear it!

tijnn responds:

I guess that's just your style, and i appreciate teh comments but i just like 8-bit sounds together with such music, i just really adore a big wall of sound.

And that's what this is, after the intro, no? Although im a sucker for glitch too ;)